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I intentionally avoided deep immersion in the middle chapters. I wanted Leo’s life to feel “thin” and frictionless — the kind of...

Color has value. What is this value? Value in color refers to the relative lightness or darkness of a hue. The purpose of value is to...

ouch, sorry friend. I just thought your art ideas almost vibing with mine. My bad.

To be honest, the image of her on crystal ball ruin it.

and... done!!

Oh wow, thank you so much! I think i get it now after read your example. It's like my thought talking to me. like this part : It feels...

Ehh, I really feel like this is just a level of experience you need to have. Frankly, I just have umbrage with "deep" being a new word...

For me, Art is about how much soul you pour it into your craft. The writing might not work as an art if you're forced to make it. So, if...

It is actually refreshing idea. The plot about personality detachment, resentment between reality and the expectation, and you finish it...

This is a complete short story (4 chapters), not a serial. I’m specifically looking for feedback after reading all four chapters...

yeah, as Eldoria said, it's about the immersion. And for me it's still very hard to apply it, HAHAHA

That's just show don't tell, no? I think I wrote like that sometimes, gives the reader more expression to imagine. Though, I should...

Don't oversimplify the issue. Deep POV isn't just about showing. Deep POV is about high-level immersion. Do you know the narrative...

Deep POV is a writing style that immerses readers directly into a character's experience by removing all narrative distance between...