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Ah thank you, good point regarding "I". I didn't think about substitute it, I'll try different approach about it. And for the chapter...

This is just personal taste 4 "I" opener, I don't like, unless it is there for a poetic aesthetic, if there is I didn't like it enough...

Not necessary, The context is about : The MC is typical Delusional-Narcistic-Self Absorbed Young man. He's living together with his...

So, i tried to improve my writing by improving my Deep POV approach. Since my story already reaching the main Psychological Thriller...

Mine literally Delusional-Narcistic-Villain MC, HAHAHA

Chapter title Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness or Cookin' With Lasers Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new...

Cookin' with Lasers better. Or if i may suggested "Blazing Light" or "Over-heat"

Ohh sorry, i got partial color blind :sweat_smile:

Thank you!! It is in color, it’s just that he himself is very pale (vampire), and wearing a white shirt, and there’s moonlight shining...

with the last couple experts chiming in I don't even wanna *think* of the hell I'd catch for my own covers.

Sadly most of the people will Judge from the cover first brother, hahahahaha for this one, i'm gonna agree with those expert analysist...

Same with my feedback... Weak pose, and weak value. The composition is still not aligned. The tone is still too messy, too much red...

I'm just using the MC name from my writing since it sound unusual and aesthetic, HAHAHAHA

Daym, this one looks good! it made me wonder how's it look in color, since i see like blushes on his face.

I wonder if this illustration is a little too spicy uncensored...? :blob_hmm: Anyways, scene from the latest chapter. After nearly 200k...