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Would it count as LitRPG? - Yes. LitRPG is defined by the inclusion of game systems, mechanics, and similar elements as part of the...

Tobias Anderson is the only one who actually has a "backpack" but he doesn't make a habit of carrying "useless" items. Though, if I...

I think "wang" might work here.

So, I want to write a superpower story, but every idea sounds like a rip-off of My Hero Academia, so I figure maybe it was how they got...

In my experience, and from other suggestions I've heard over the few months that I've been uploading for; these are the main points to...

Why not create your own trend? If you're just writing for fun, it's better to write fiction that aligns with your artistic vision. This...

Overwriting the original works when you have minor/small revisions. Rewriting a story and keeping the original is good for proving that...

Unless the academy arc is absolutely vital to the narrative... Skip it. You can always reveal the necessary elements later via flashback...

Duskfall: Chapter 3 - Remnants of the Past just dropped.

You're welcome, and as long as the critique helped you with something, then it served its purpose. You've also clearly learned something...

Yeah, it's a preference. Honestly, reading something primarily in first person is really, really weird to me. Most novels I have read...

I guess I now understand the preference aspect of first vs third person. Most of the novels and stories I read are in first person. When...

I base my characters off of character models. only I know who they are IRL. I know what they look like, if its a physical character...

I actually dislike it when it's part of a gag. "haha dude looks like a lady" is a lot less funny the 17th time. If it's part of the...

That's fair, though in Astolfo's case (Fate/) he actually has a "skill" that causes him to have very poor reasoning (and as a result, he...