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MFontana replied to the thread What do YOU like to see in a story?.Consistency, in narrative and character. Narrative and Character depth, to create a sense of lived moments rather than hollow plot... -
MFontana reacted to LeslieLevendale's post in the thread What do YOU like to see in a story? with
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Six years? Congratulation. I usually read romance rather than action. And I also right contemporary, character driven, slow-burn... -
Monster girls, romance and smut :blob_evil: Okay honest answer, just solid characters, a story that isn't hard to follow, and writing...
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What do I like to see in a story? Originality Plot Properly formed characters No massive continuity holes! No overly convoluted plot...
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MFontana reacted to AnEmberOfSundown's post in the thread I think I get isekai now (warning: navel-gazing ahead) with Like.
Sorry, I probably should have been clearer about what I meant by "getting" it. I'm not assuming one single reason why people like the...
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MFontana reacted to Sylver's post in the thread [Discussion] In your understanding, what is martial art? with Like.
How do you think I feel? I use to have a crush on him in Dragon Ball :blob_pout: seeing how he was done in Z hurt, and the haircut he...
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Thanks for the extensive review. I appreciate it. I think you're right in saying the scene feels rushed, and that's probably due to my...
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Slightly less brutal than the Kpopvirus
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MFontana reacted to SirContro's post in the thread Writing If your protagonist lived in the real world, what nationality might your protagonist be? with Haha.
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MFontana reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread Writing If your protagonist lived in the real world, what nationality might your protagonist be? with Haha.
Well, my MC literally renamed his demon kingdom to Murica, so...
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MFontana replied to the thread [Discussion] In your understanding, what is martial art?.I'm not. He was an awesome character in the OG Dragonball. They just sidelined him HARD in Z. I'm pretty sure he's still the only one...
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MFontana reacted to Sylver's post in the thread [Discussion] In your understanding, what is martial art? with Like.
No dissing the Wolf Fang Fist! 🐺
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MFontana replied to the thread [Discussion] In your understanding, what is martial art?.So basically anything that isn't what Yamucha does in Dragonball Z.
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MFontana reacted to ThaddeusDeVilliers's post in the thread [Discussion] In your understanding, what is martial art? with Haha.
In movies and in stories? Fighting, but look cool while doing it.
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MFontana replied to the thread Is this sex scene paced well?.First off, as a matter of personal preferences, I'd drop this real quick, as I'm not overly fond of reading first-person stuff. This...