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Please read mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

It was urban fantasy but it's not inside a city yet. Would you like to try? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

Hmm, as if AI could write.

A very loooooooong chapter. I get why you want to put it that way. You don't want to leave it as a cliffhanger. Anyways, your scenes aren't too shabby, you are trying to write a dominant enemy and I understood your scenes. But apparently, I guess this is what "show, don't tell" means here...

46 chapters, so which chapter is the action scene? I only came here for the action scene, not skimming through every short chapters.

First off, if the mc is a fighter, he should've noticed the staff right at the beginning. Everyone knows what is a staff, so you don't need to explain it's use. I'm not sure what does average weapon means though. A staff is a staff, if you compare it to a dagger or sword it's longer. If you...

Somehow mine starts with a dark fantasy. Perhaps a little bit of horror and mystery. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

I would like to have a try. Was wondering whether my 1st chapter is catchy or not. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

I would like to try. I made a different approach by removing the old prologue. Not sure whether it's enough to catch your attention. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

I would like a review. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

Hello. I don't mind if your feedback is harsh or tearing me to shreds. Aside from the cover, I would like the synopsis and at least the first chapter. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world-volume-/

Ignoring the note. No idea because I haven't have a so-called final boss yet. At most, you can called it the final boss of every arc. What I keep in mind was the goal I wanted to achieve for that battle. For example: 1. Domr, a giant Fenrir wolf that was once an ally was brainwashed to...

Details, logic checks and filling in the plot holes. The hardest part for me is to do a logic check in mind to cover the plot holes. And boy oh boy mystery novel sure had lots of plot holes.

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