Recent content by LuciferVermillion

Hello. I don't mind if your feedback is harsh or tearing me to shreds. Aside from the cover, I would like the synopsis and at least the first chapter. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world-volume-/

Ignoring the note. No idea because I haven't have a so-called final boss yet. At most, you can called it the final boss of every arc. What I keep in mind was the goal I wanted to achieve for that battle. For example: 1. Domr, a giant Fenrir wolf that was once an ally was brainwashed to...

Details, logic checks and filling in the plot holes. The hardest part for me is to do a logic check in mind to cover the plot holes. And boy oh boy mystery novel sure had lots of plot holes.

Newest sketch sample. Signature as proof.

Name/Username: LuciferVermillion Discord: LuciferVermillion Profession: Not so professional illustrator/Author Preferred Art Style: Anime Hiring Rate: $10 sketch Payment methods: Transferwise Work Requirement: Give me all the references you have Portfolio...

So from what I understood, you have classes and mana. Too many things I want to ask, but I'm going to look at magic system only. Without classes, your magic is slower and cap lower. With class, depending on what the class are, you have different buffs with magic. Logic check: 1. Your mana...

Curious to ask, more is how many?

Pressing Alt + 9834 = ♪ in Microsoft Words. No idea if anything else could make such a symbol. It does not work if I type this code here in scribblehub.

Broken yet alive. A jack of all trades yet master of none. Bullshitting my bosses to get a raise and bonus. If I had enough money I would buy the company and make them my slaves.

No idea. But I only know how it feels with every closing arc.

I need a girlfriend like this.

Now here's the problem. It has something to do with the plot, but if I explain too much over those little details, it became an info dump. And another problem is, does story always contains lots of dialogues or conversations? For example, here's a scene I'm working out on: "Alright then...

As a first-person POV author myself, I want to share something. 1. You should perhaps, look around in the forums. Everyone is picky about number the chapters, and you don't have that after revising it. 2. Your synopsis is thematic and atmospheric, but it lacks narrative "teeth." It reads more...

Feels like this.

I'm always bad with descriptions and grammar. Whenever I try to describe something, it always ends up getting too wordy. Usually, I imagine myself in the scene and started to use my six senses, see, hear, smell, touch, taste, think. Is there a simpler way to make sure what you were describing...