Many of the most popular genres of pornography feature the transformation of a woman, whether by magic or pleasure so overwhelming they 'willingly' change. A mental or physical change brought on by another.
The general fantasy is the ability to make women love you with absolute devotion. This...
all of them. I want to cook 99.6% pure 'crack fiction' to rival Walter White. I want this because I am a fiendish fiction tweaker and I want to lead others into darkness with me
blud you have two passionate commentators who talk exactly like you with all the "bro bro bro", both accounts were made under a week ago, they only have you in their reading list, both rate the story five stars, both have only ever commented on your story
I can't tell which is worse, you got...
I suppose if the number of readers dropped x 10 is less than still reading that is a good metric. Some stories have crazy good hooks and get tons of views but the actual writing causes many people to drop.
Personally, I think a ratio of words to stats is a good way to measure.
You can compare...
blud, the very first sentence has an improper lowercase i
"Aughhhh, my head hurts like as if i had been hit by a truck, i thought ironically to myself"
This is your opening, and it makes me sigh.
Your synopsis has improper grammar too, like literally "A person worth" should be "A person's...
U mean u look for ur story and nothing pops up even when u copy paste the title
Or
Not in latest updates
The story is up if you can see it in your profile, under series
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