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  1. Lookbehindyou

    Chain Story

    Richard laughed. "Indexes? You sound just like my exes! Now, begone before I punch you in the solar plexus and send you to Texas."
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    What is your story ACTUALLY about

    Many of the most popular genres of pornography feature the transformation of a woman, whether by magic or pleasure so overwhelming they 'willingly' change. A mental or physical change brought on by another. The general fantasy is the ability to make women love you with absolute devotion. This...
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    What kind of fiction quality do you want to achieve as an author?

    all of them. I want to cook 99.6% pure 'crack fiction' to rival Walter White. I want this because I am a fiendish fiction tweaker and I want to lead others into darkness with me
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    Chain Story

    Richard clutched his side in pain before realizing he already had his appendix removed due to complications years ago.
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    Class/profession debate

    anti demon king class
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    The true home of DIVERSITY

    rock
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    ? New Fantasy Novel – I Will Never Let Her Suffer Again

    blud you have two passionate commentators who talk exactly like you with all the "bro bro bro", both accounts were made under a week ago, they only have you in their reading list, both rate the story five stars, both have only ever commented on your story I can't tell which is worse, you got...
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    What are some major milestones to track for your stories?

    I suppose if the number of readers dropped x 10 is less than still reading that is a good metric. Some stories have crazy good hooks and get tons of views but the actual writing causes many people to drop. Personally, I think a ratio of words to stats is a good way to measure. You can compare...
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    What are some major milestones to track for your stories?

    it does not matter unless you are trying to have a Patreon or publish. Whatever number makes you happy, aim for that.
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    Reaching Beyond Heaven : My Cultivation Had No Negative Effects .

    blud, the very first sentence has an improper lowercase i "Aughhhh, my head hurts like as if i had been hit by a truck, i thought ironically to myself" This is your opening, and it makes me sigh. Your synopsis has improper grammar too, like literally "A person worth" should be "A person's...
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    Secrets of the one above game

    The one above tried to eat me, but I survived
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    New Series Submission

    Share the book name or profile name
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    New Series Submission

    U mean u look for ur story and nothing pops up even when u copy paste the title Or Not in latest updates The story is up if you can see it in your profile, under series Share name or link if not working
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    How do you grow an audience?

    When you crack the code let us know :blob_whistle_two:
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    Who tf are u?

    Who tf are u?
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    Hi. Did you delete your scribble hub account? I'm fairly certain I'm talking to a ghost. Well...

    Hi. Did you delete your scribble hub account? I'm fairly certain I'm talking to a ghost. Well, just so I remember, and because I don't think anybody will ever see this, You left a very nice comment. I'll remember it fondly. It was something along the lines of, "You've created something very...
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    Is this concept strong enough to capture attention?

    I have no clue what after noon means if not afternoon. Like after, noon a person, dies? This starting line is interesting but tells me little about what to expect. Doomed love? Saving the love using time? I can't rate the concept because I have no clue what it is. Just my thoughts. Good luck...
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    very cool dungeon core story

    I read that ppl dont like many paragraphs in a row so as to not to exhaust mobile readers one should be generous with the enter key and let big chunks of text breathe with tiny one sentence paragraphs between them
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    Thoughts on random story idea? Sorry if it is messy

    Is this a prologue or plot? oops same question at the same time
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    Feedback on my Synopsis?

    A quote without a speaker? Or just a common idiom? HollowBright? Is that a gamer tag? Why both capped? Or is it a middle name and a last name merged? Star crossed as in they met or they are fated or they are dating already? I can't comment on the horoscope thing... Idk about that kinda stuff...
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