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He forms bonds of love with all his enemies, building both a harem and a kingdom. This is pretty interesting. Maybe I’ll try writing it...

Just make what they kill a threat to humanity? like evil monsters, demons, and shit, it's not that hard

For example, it would be helpful if you could share which specific work that was said about, and provide an example.

If it were me, I would ask a trusted friend to read it and give me their honest opinion — no sugarcoating.

Simply put, if a character has strengths that make up for their flaws, they will become compelling.

That's bizarre but makes some sense, especially if you watch Korean, Japanese or Italian dramas (and especially the odd Korean-Italian...

The Principles of Food Theory in Storytelling In characterization, "Food Theory" suggests that a character's nature is revealed through...

The third POV has a smoother pacing. As a causal reader, I can still catch the flow of the story more smoothly in the third POV although...

There are too many characters, so let’s reduce the number. It places too much of a burden on the reader to keep track of all the...

I felt that this story skillfully transplants the Korean-origin dungeon genre format into 1979 American society, portraying the lives of...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2189063/hacking-the-system-kingdom-of-stone-litrpg/

to be fair, a boxer moving their head to miss a punch or even "slip" one (glances off, no real damage) is common. two types of punches...

Keep it up, put your story in my reading list so I'm looking forward for the future of it ;) Oops :blob_dizzy: The first chapter...

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and for your thoughtful feedback. Your comments helped me notice areas that would...

I liked the opening with the fly landing on her eye a lot, but after that the protagonist started feeling kinda unrealistic to me. If I...