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I don't know what to say, thank you for your words, it's comforting to know that, and you're right, after all, everything has its time...

Well, I can see the results of your hard work. People say, writing fiction is about art and feeling. But I would say, writing fiction is...

Thank you so much for your detailed comment. You're absolutely right about my tendency to over-explain things, and I really appreciate...

Well, after reading 3 chapters (including the prologue) in once reading to gauge immersion, I'm giving you feedback as a reader. My...

I really enjoyed the atmosphere and core concept of this chapter. The idea of a “survival-based power” and the cockroach analogy are...

Well, I'm giving feedback as a casual reader. I usually only read once to gauge immersion. But this time I relaxed the reading...

I’ve read up to Chapter 2, and while there are many important elements, the frequent shifts in emotional perspective make it hard for...

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Has your story received a really positive comment? Most likely in the very first chapter of your story? Chances are: 1. You are an...

Since you asked for it, let me put it bluntly. I know you’re trying to paint Daniel as this jaded, cynical guy, but he comes across as...

I’ll just leave one final thought. Try not to fall into perfectionism. Keep writing, and more importantly, finish what you start. In my...

Yes but you have to keep in mind that those scores are biased. We are all comparing your novel to something different; in our minds, we...

Here's my opinion. Asking for ratings isn't biased as long as you know what you're trying to measure in your narrative. I've created...

I can’t give this a numerical score. The reason is that this chapter functions as a statement of intent rather than something that can...

It is actually refreshing idea. The plot about personality detachment, resentment between reality and the expectation, and you finish it...