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The slice-of-life opening in Chapter 1 works really well. You can clearly feel the warmth of the found-family dynamic, and it does a...

Some stories won't do well on certain platforms no matter how good or consistently uploaded it is. It will be hard for your story to...

10,000 what? Readers?! Views?! In the history of SH, only less than 10 authors have reached 5-digit readership. 10k views?! That's...

The hijacking functions as a “mystery,” but it is used merely as a device to isekai the protagonist, which could make readers feel...

Thank you so much, i'll learn more about it :blobthumbsup::blobthumbsup::blobthumbsup:

Ah I see, if i want to use First POV, i should focus more on "what i feel" yes? Interesting, i didn't think about it. Thank you, you...

I think this fight scene is very realistic and easy to follow. The movements, timing, and rule handling all feel authentic, which is a...

Oh, that makes sense. Thank you for taking the time to give feedback.

Noted. I will think of a different way to describe Kazuya. And quick question, what do you mean by "Self-image is distorted"? I'm a...

By “self-image is distorted,” I just meant that Kazuya might judge himself much more harshly than other people do. He feels like he’s...

Thank you for your words! I am truly happy knowing my work impacted you so. I am excited for you to follow her journey as well. The next...

Hello, Like many here I too am a first time writer. I have never written anything before. I also don't have much of an education so...

Honestly speaking, this is extremely engaging. The contrast between the Prologue, which depicts Valentina as a vampire in the midst of...

There may be a small inconsistency between the initial description (“a complete loner who can barely hold a conversation with his little...

Most users just ask for feedback and don't bother saying what kind of feedback they need. The worse kind don't even put the scene or the...