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No problem... you just answer the scale option 1 for hard to imagine. An honest answer is the answer I'm looking for. This is...

I think your motivation and expressive effort in writing hand-to-hand combat scenes are excellent. By paying attention to the points...

The opening makes Jeremy look mentally ill rather than system-controlled. Without an early, non-psychological sign of abnormality...

I’ve read it. I think it would work better if you cut the first half and start directly with the truck collision in the latter half. The...

I used to work in an office just off Times Square. Honestly, pretty accurate description. So I commend you for that Also please add...

thanks a lot your points really helped me out i will do a whole revision regarding the earlier chapters soon! i will make them similar...

My suggestion is to download Grammarly. However, huge props that you didn't go down the clanker route. Apart from that, I can only say...

I like the idea for sure. Thank god it's not a weeb-ish story, it's where you know best. I like that. Your technicals need some work...

Read your first chapter. Um... okay. I'm going to sound hostile, but there is no bite intended. This is just to jar your imagination in...

Thanks for taking the time to read it and for the honest reaction. I see what you mean about Maya seeming too rational after something...

This is not a story about a cute heroine who always makes the right choices. If you enjoy morally ambiguous female protagonists and...

thank you a lot for the input! i try to make the readers feel the situation as best as i can. regarding the writing it was my first time...

i am making an isekai novel that i believe to be original, long story short is the MC's city gets invaded by another world that can use...

It is certainly rough and sometimes hard to read, but I really like how the protagonist is clearly not standing on the “good” side, yet...

Thank you for sharing your opening. The atmosphere and imagery are very intriguing, especially the faceless figure and the golden card —...