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The writing is solid and the structure is engaging — I really liked how training, dreams, and the practical realities of money and...

Thanks for sharing K_Nishi, this is why i uploaded my work. ?

Prose quality is strong, but the opening leans too heavily into environmental and system description. As a web reader, I struggled to...

lol thank you for giving me the chance to discuss it with you. :blob_happy:

Well said. But I think land can tell a story without characters being present. For example when I say Chernobyl, you know the place...

Thank you for the detailed explanation. I think that traces of daily life and hints of what once happened can give readers a reason to...

Well, I actually prefer fiction as a medium for education or exploration of thought or imaginative reality. However, I also know...

I think the concept itself is very interesting, especially as a kind of fictional documentary or travelogue. However, speaking honestly...

I can understand what you’re trying to convey, but I struggled to visualize anything from the opening line.