Recent content by Juia_Darkcrest

- First off, your prologue and c1 are out of order; and - Your title for c1 is all lowercase, while c2 has a single capital. You probably want to make your titles look like this; Chapter 1: The Man Behind the Veil OR Chapter 1: The Man Behind The Veil - I read part of c1 and honestly, I...

How you do it is up to you. I will swap in comedy after some more serious scenes... like today, my MC got 'princess carried' by an 8 ft tall woman after he healed her injuries and collapsed from near-mana exhaustion... There was a bunch of more serious stuff going on in the last few chapters...

I write in SH editor (yay dark mode!), copy paste to google docs to edit, then copy paste it back... I haven't seen any issues yet.

anyway, OP Your stones should reflect their rarity. Some very common ones would probably be like a commoner trying to buy a nice pair of boots, not impossible for them to get, but they would need to save some money to do so, so maybe 10-20 silver in the economy I mentioned, then move up from...

/shrug Its the D&D economy except on 100s instead of 10s.

I wasn't going for realism here, just ease of calculation for the writer, so you don't confuse the fuck out of yourself when you are trying to follow that chart you just linked. You are writing a story, not worrying about medieval accounting practices. Like a coin minted from one nation could...

Ahh, yes, the good ol' meat bun economy. Definitely beat the Turnip economics. depends on how normal people live day to day in this world. Is it a decent life, considering they are peasants? Are they struggling even to get the basics? Using the base ten system is usually best for anything...

I prefer the traditional novel format. However, I do most of my reading on a mobile device now, so I prefer no more than 2-4 sentences, then a space for eye relief. If there is one thing on a phone I hate, it is being presented a wall of text. Dialogue follows the same thing. If the person is...

Having a cat allows for random interludes of things being knocked off tables, a cat stuck on the curtains, or other devices you can use to segue into your next scene. Or get a duck, for the waddles.

Time is such a weird thing... rather, the passage of time Sometimes I feel I have been waiting thirty minutes for something, and barely a minute has passed. Other times, I think it's been five minutes, it's actually been four hours.

it would be beautiful!

... your tags will tell your readers what to expect. If you want to explore something your tags don't explain, you can make an Author's Note saying what you plan to do and asking if that would bother anyone. I just checked your tags. I am assuming this is some kind of relationship you want to...