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I'd imagine its less dramatic than you think. Likely they just bounced off enough to not read for a week or two. Then, when they did...

I... WHAT??? Am I being trolled like

Women were not historically oppressed. This is feminist propaganda. As for minorities, they are the ones doing the oppression now. So...

To write a truly compelling narrative the most important tool is empathy. Art isn't always kind, sweet. I don't make kind and sweet...

I've never really been able to get into fanfiction, for some reason. Even about stories I really enjoy and want more of. Maybe I just...

Don't really enjoy fanfiction... feels.... claustrophobic... Like, there is an invisible prison you can never get out of.

I don't get the feeling of panic. It feels satirical or comedic more than dreadful or panic inducing.

All the time. Whether or not I actually go back and rewrite it depends on when I have the idea. If it's while I'm still writing the...

I think it's pretty cool

Your sentences aren’t necessarily too long-winded (they’re maybe half the length of mine on average), it’s that you use the same...

First of all thank you for reading my story. From your observation it seems that my large winded sentences are hard for readers to...

There's some good advice here regarding how to structure a synopsis, but not a lot about how to write one. Something that I think is...

Well, frankly, your synopsis feels cold because it positions the reader as a neutral observer. A good synopsis is one that makes the...

It depends on what function your synopsis should perform. It can introduce the world so that the first chapters don't seem too...

On a micro-level, you start a lot of your sentences with participle phrases. While not the worst thing in the world, I'd go back and see...