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There's not a lot of meat here. Your chapter is almost exclusively dialogue, with bits of really bare prose here and there. On top of...

I believe that this site is full of creative people, therefore I stand with the statement that story covers should also be creative, not...

You kind of lost me here, with the way you've politicized AI usage. At risk of getting into a political debate (not my intent), fascist...

First person can be really tough, especially for new writers. There's a tendency to be very...quipy? I suppose? Meta? Often, I find...

Congrats! It's always a great feeling when you actually start to get somewhere with your ideas. It makes the whole thing feel more real.

So, for the first time ever, I'm reaching the first major turning point a novel I write, which may not mean much to you, but nice to me...

Some of the best literature in the world is about characters who get worse. Sometimes, by the end of a story, they realize who've they...

Idk I hate the hypocrisy some authors have I've seen around the internet. Why do we complain about AI Writing then turn around and use...

I've only ever written for other people. Writing is a destructive process--you can't ever fully take what's in your mind and put it into...

Certainly not unique to the genre, but unique to me: I've really been trying to work on Le Guin's 'elfland accdent' and to experiment...

It takes a lot of work to put together worthwhile feedback. Why put in all that effort if the author themselves won't put in the same...

What is the point of focusing on what is on the page if it is not written by the human asking for feedback? If they don’t even write...

Using AI is disastrous. Especially, for starting authors. It elevates them to a level that they simply do not have at that point. As a...

Can I ask why you're so invested in using first person if you're interested in going beyond the limited point of view it offers? The...

This thread is useful for people who are desperate for input and have received none so far. However, you generally don't want critical...