I took a quick look at your story.
You have readers, rave reviews, and raging fans.
It's light hearted and that works.
I detect heavy AI use, but it's done expertly and remains entertaining so you'll get a pass.
The joke beats land. It's hard to do comedy.
So no, you done good, too good.
I will...
I bought a quasar to show and tell but was told it was unsafe so I had to put it back. Then I put my fingers in the containmnt field and they became frogs. But I have hooves so they were another person's fingers.