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When you insert Akuma's routine info dump in the middle of the action, it causes a shift in POV from a limited third POV to an...

Do you have any confusion?

After reading five chapters, I stopped. Here are my general impressions of your narrative based on my reading experience: Your story...

I realized long ago that 95% of people asking for feedback only want someone to read. You have to change the reason you are doing...

That’s why one shouldn’t bother giving feedback on heavily AI edited stories. They refuse to write their own work. It’s not much of a...

Personally, if a person make a thread, in the first 2 months the op should endeavor to react or replying to every reply, unless its...

They want fluffers, not actual critiques. Which just sucks.

💝 :blob_reach: Thank you blobby~.

A brief reaction and/or reply is the bare minimum of etiquette to humanize fellow writers. Is this a heavy ask? :blob_teary:

To anyone who claims to be asking for honest feedback, please be honest with yourself. Don't say you're asking for feedback if you...

How did you change that title under your user and pfp? All this time I assumed it was like a mod only thing or somethin It's all fine...

Ah yes, i remember that kind of bargaining strategy

Sorry to hear that. Can’t speak for them, but seriously, if what you send me is honest, constructive criticism, I’ll see what I can do...

You're not a teen writer, dude. :blob_melt: Well, I've read a few of your chapters and I've noticed some issues. But I'm still in a bad...

I won't ignore your feedback :blob_aww: