Eldoria's latest activity
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:blob_aww:New member~
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Eldoria commented on Jun_Sakazuki's profile post.You skiped me. I'm a new member here. :blob_aww:
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Eldoria reacted to Rosica's post in the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated) with
Haha.
I don't even know the main character's name until chapter 9. -
Eldoria replied to the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated).The synopsis is too confusing for the reader. Change the synopsis to make it more salesy. You can use the following synopsis formula...
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This is new.
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Basically, the gap between The Hobbit and LOTR.
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Ah, they're milking the franchise.
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It's only sexist if it's wrong... :blobrofl:
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I'm not secretive about my love for dragons.
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Eldoria reacted to OokamiKasumi's post in the thread Writing [Tutorial] Plot Devices: Deus Ex Machina, Chekhov's Gun & Foreshadowing with Like.
----Original Message---- "What are your thoughts on Good 'Deus Ex Machinas'? I find them hard to pull off realistically in a plot." --...
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even big bad green ones.