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And it could be that I am so suspicious of the whole "returning" I am no so invested at all in the main character's relationships... but...

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No Average if I read it straight as the story is presented Yes if there is a twist in Chapter 1 or if the Prologue's last line is...

Why don't your synopsis focus on those aspects? You don't need a what to expect section if you do your synopsis right.

My brief comment is that your synopsis uses overly technical language. It might be suitable for computer science students... but the...

What do you think, Monsieur Orc?

I finally finished my remaster for Sapphire Among Vines! I never thought this day would come! Like... I'll probably give up somewhere...

If a scene doesn’t excite me, I won’t write it. But to reach certain plot points, writing things I don’t enjoy is unavoidable. So...

Mission accomplished, then. That's the point of psychological as a genre. Good job.

Peace be upon you, Sons of Ishmael. Isaac's descendants kiss walls.

As an arab, I can confirm this. However, people usually don’t directly kiss each other’s cheeks. Instead, they place their heads next to...

If you forget to add those to your story you can always pull the pro Kojima move.

Absolutely halal.

I don't know... where that conclusion comes from. Complimenting each other, regardless of gender, is polite and diplomatic. You might...

I see prologue, I skip. What kind of man starts conversation by telling the other man they've become handsome? That's our LGBTQ+...