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Really strong advice from Rosica. Make your set-up so interesting that is also story. Interesting doesn't have to mean highstakes...

People would read anything if its piques their interest. And the easiest way to peak their interest in isekai is by putting them in this...

It’s not just isekai. Tons of genres deal with this. Readers say they want the “main thing” fast, but what they really want is a strong...

How is someone 7/20 black? how do we reach this fraction? this is not my cup of tea so i skimmed through the first 3 chapters. the...

its been two years since the last one and two more since the one before. im getting the itch again. i'll provide a simple review of...

Hey, I enjoy discovering the history of fictional worlds! But you are correct, there is no reason for that much history in the...

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That's what happens when you get a Sloth stoned

Well, I've read three of your chapters, dude. I've also read reviews of your work from other reviewers, both positive and negative. My...

Cause we're bored and decide to harass all the new people or sleeper agents that start activating and drawing attention to themselves...

I wish I could be that savage with my feedback. To OP: You’ve showered your synopsis with adjectives and buzzwords that don’t earn...

No one stopping me so another one, heights like everybody else. When I stand next to the window or balcony from third floor or higher my...

Damn why is my feedback thread filled with veteran writers? How could I challenge my reviewing skills, lol.

Yes, sensei!