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Eldoria reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread As a reader, what is your attention span tolerance for the minimum and maximum number of sentences in a paragraph? with
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I had no desire to read going into kindergarten. By the time I started first grade, I was reading at least at a third-grade level, and... -
Don't forget that their portfolio links lead to somebody else's art account. out of curiosity, I followed one one day and the poor guy's...
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Eldoria replied to the thread New Author Seeking Feedback.Well, good luck. I'll be looking forward to seeing how you transform your narrative into something more in-depth from Lila's...
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I understand! This was so enlightening, thank you. 😭🙏🏻 It’s too late for me to do it tonight but tomorrow I’m going to go back through...
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Eldoria replied to the thread New Author Seeking Feedback.Well, now I'll explain what I felt as a reader when reading chapter 1. Honestly, the atmosphere of your chapter 1 was good. The...
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😱 that was definitely not my intention!! She’s supposed to be a distinct character, a medical student that has been dropped into another...
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Eldoria replied to the thread New Author Seeking Feedback.Well, I agree with you. The limited third POV is right in line with your narrative goal, where you want the reader to connect with the...
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The idea was to be third person limited, as if we are directly in Lila’s mind experiencing the world alongside her. I chose that POV...
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Eldoria replied to the thread First comment!.I got a long comment. Lol
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Moo Principle # 547 - If a story I'm writing must be railed along rigid genre definitions and trope formulas, I get bored writing it in...
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@Eldoria not really... I started frequenting the forum way before I actually write anything I think. But for most readers it's probably...
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Eldoria replied to the thread New Author Seeking Feedback.Well, I've read chapter 1 (prologue?). I wanted to ask, what kind of POV did you use in chapter 1? And why did you choose that POV?
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Eldoria reacted to RepresentingEnvy's post in the thread Writing If your protagonist lived in the real world, what nationality might your protagonist be? with Like.
My protagonist is an American.
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Hello everyone! I just discovered ScribbleHub and posted the first ~7 chapters of my story. I haven’t had anyone (beta) read it yet so...
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Eldoria reacted to Pennywise's post in the thread Writing If your protagonist lived in the real world, what nationality might your protagonist be? with Like.
Alien like me