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I hope my feedback was not too overwhelming/harshly received; it was not intended that way. Anyone that takes the courage to put out... -
Yeah, but it took me 4 days to coloring this one
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Thank you, I'm glad you like my arts. I just draw figure that pop up on my head, haha Raw Sketch + Shading and Coloring using Corel+PSD :
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Post it on your profile on the main site.
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I'd actually like to comment on your synopsis. For once I decided to check it, mostly because of Eldoria's comment on the mature tag...
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Eldoria replied to the thread I would Love Some Feedback.As I suspected, you're still too young for honest, constructive, and blunt feedback. Initially, I wanted to offer such feedback. But I...
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Sure.
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Thank you for this, I really appreciate you taking the time to go into so much detail. I won’t lie, it was a bit overwhelming at first...
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Eldoria reacted to ElijahRyne's post in the thread Writing Which approach to moving the plot do you prefer: world influences MC or MC influences world? with
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Exactly ideally the world should be dialectical in nature. Of course the ideal is different from real. Style, skill, tone, and intended... -
Eldoria reacted to MFontana's post in the thread Writing Which approach to moving the plot do you prefer: world influences MC or MC influences world? with Like.
This actually falls under one of my narrative-writing rules. Nothing exists in a vacuum. Everything is interconnected. Everything in the...
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Eldoria reacted to Bayleyrockstar's post in the thread As a reader, what is your attention span tolerance for the minimum and maximum number of sentences in a paragraph? with Like.
As someone who has forced themselves to attempt to read those, on a phone no less, I can say they basically put a paragraph of...
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Eldoria reacted to Time4T's post in the thread As a reader, what is your attention span tolerance for the minimum and maximum number of sentences in a paragraph? with Like.
"As a reader, what is your attention span tolerance for the minimum and maximum number of sentences in a paragraph?" And then all the...
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Eldoria reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene? with Like.
If you narrate your story through third person limited or first person, both poetic and clinical options are… iffy. To authentically...
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Oof, I thought that more blunt description would be easier to understand and I removed some environment details because I thought the...