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For some reason, your writing here feels like a First POV forced to Third POV narrative. Like Eldoria and BernKatstel suggest, for third... -
I gave it a read. I mostly agree with what Eldoria said: there’s a very distinct lack of description and immersive writing overall. I...
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Eldoria reacted to strayCat0's post in the thread Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene? with
Love.
What mood and character's perspective & emotion do you want to portray? I see that you only say that you want it to be not exploitative... -
Eldoria reacted to Bald-san's post in the thread Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene? with Like.
It's not about sensitivity, it's about necessity
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Eldoria replied to the thread Feedback for the Prologue.Honestly, dude. In terms of writing style, I prefer your old prologue. The old prologue had a solid narrative. The scenes were very...
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Hello, I tried to rewrite my Prologue for my web-novel : Battle Mage. Please give me your thought about the content of my prologue. Any...
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I just dropped a chapter of my story and I’m trying to improve my writing 🖤 I’d really love feedback on: – pacing (does it feel slow or...
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Done:s_smile: Thanks for the advice
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Eldoria reacted to c37's post in the thread Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene? with Like.
It would depend on the scene right? If the scene supposed to be tense then 3rd option is good, of it is a memory 1st option is good, idk...
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Eldoria reacted to ThaddeusDeVilliers's post in the thread [Tutorial] For new users of Scribble Hub! with Like.
Thanks for doing this, it's very helpful.
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Eldoria reacted to GhoulishTales's post in the thread Writing How tolerant are you of whether the scene elements should be showing or telling? with Like.
It depends on the genre/style you are writing your narrative within. A narrative structured as a series of journal entries should be...
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Eldoria reacted to Assurbanipal_II's post in the thread Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene? with Like.
:meowsip: Ask yourself, is it conductive to your work? If yes, then all three options work.
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Eldoria reacted to Quacky's post in the thread Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene? with Like.
It's hard to say because most people here haven't read your story and any way of doing it can be good depending on your story, the...
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shameless plug
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It's almost like people don't realize that public posts can be seen by everyone, including the very people they're talking about...