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Sensory details should be the effect of an action. In one paragraph it should describe an element of the scene which can be anything...

"Show, don't tell" applies a lot more to other media than writing, simply because they can show. You can have an entire action scene...

I see i tried limiting the description and i was led to short paragraphs.

You should thank @Eldoria for that, though. :blob_cookie:

Hey, thank you so much for pointing that out earlier, I really appreciate it 🤍 I’m so sorry for the late reply, I somehow missed your...

Your writing style is easy to read. The writing isn't your problem. Perhaps the problem is more related to the content of the story.

You have like a gazillion authors/writers here on this site, and only a dozen or so really skilled artists. Even if you don't want to...

My goal is create my own manwha or at least visualize web novel. The main problem now is writing, haha

Tutoria with some more great insights. :blob_aww:

Make sense

The mods just pull up to your conversation with a formal and politely worded post with that outlines wich post of yours violated the...

Likely mods, someone must've reported them. I don't think bots will be able to filter out what's on topic and what's provocative.

Hmm... I'm seeing a pattern. Thread replies that don't address the topic or are provocative are automatically deleted. Does SHF have a...

I have awakened-nyah! :blob_evil:

I haven't read chapter 9 in its entirety, just checking your chapter format. Why do you use short paragraphs (1 paragraph = 1 sentence)...