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Please call me after you finish writing the chapter. I'll review it when I have free time.

That was really helpful. Tho I'd really like to know more about the other points I'd like to fix the paragraph and pov for now atleast...

Well, I won't beat around the bush. I've read your 4 chapters. Here are my impressions: (1) The atmosphere is actually quite good...

I mean… this is basically a group of cute chibis being high, right? (Hurray for fantasy magic mushrooms.) For me, it reads more like a...

You can remove the quotes from the chapter title. It will look better again, only if not intentional.

Before I give feedback, I would like to know... what type of POV you are using?

Shame, one of my friends would post on Wattpad a lot when we were in high school. I now realize a decade has passed. LOL

Wattpad is dead @Anonjohn20 It will take forever to get any readers compared to RR

Theres also the trend I've seen on RR where peeps are not just jealous, but just dont like things the author said on the forum so they...

Heyo everyone, OrionVale here. I'm seeking advice and feedbacks for my first series with 6 chapter as prologue tho it felt long I want...

I attached the link. Feedback about weakness and strength, something lacking something need reinforcement

Oh, you never know what might happen... Thanks for your response.

Link of your story? And what feedback do you want?

I'm just over here, reading someone else's opinion on someone else's story :blob_popcorn: somehow, just sniffing fart fumes left in this...