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- First off, your prologue and c1 are out of order; and - Your title for c1 is all lowercase, while c2 has a single capital. You... -
Eldoria reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread How to be funny and still be a good writer? with
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You make it sound like you can't be a good writer if you do comedy. If you can deliver a comedy that many people enjoy, then you're... -
Eldoria replied to the thread Looking for Honest Feedback on My Story.Put your thread in the feedback section so that other authors can easily find your thread and maybe give a review.
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Eldoria replied to the thread Can I get a review?.Well, I've bookmarked your fiction. I'll be patient and see how your narrative develops into a philosophical narrative.
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Eldoria reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread Got my first one star reviews kinda hurts. with Like.
If you write genuinely with passion and continuously improve, rating don't matter at all. I've recently gotten my first 1 stars and I...
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Thank you so much for reading✨️ I will edit it out to suit formatting. That's such a well detailed feedback! I can agree with you in...
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Eldoria commented on A-Random-Writer's profile post.You might be experiencing creative burnout, dude. Take a break, relax. You can resume your fiction when you're in a better mood.
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Good feedback as usual.
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Eldoria replied to the thread Can I get a review?.Well, I've read two of your chapters. My impression is, are you sure this is a fantasy genre? Your synopsis describes this fiction as...
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Ephemeral, Yet Eternal | Scribble Hub Hello! I am new and I want to know if my story suits the platform.
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Eldoria reacted to ThisAdamGuy's post in the thread How to be funny and still be a good writer? with Like.
Why do you think they have to be mutually exclusive? Henry Rider: Clown Hunter is pretty much predicated on the idea that a story can be...
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Alright guys so this is my first official writing so i need a review and areas you think i need to improve on...
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Eldoria reacted to MC-Stories's post in the thread How to be funny and still be a good writer? with Like.
Agreed
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Eldoria replied to the thread How to be funny and still be a good writer?.Well, we all (authors) start with a single stroke of ink. At least his work is funny, fitting for its genre (comedy). I wouldn't be so...
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Eldoria replied to the thread How to be funny and still be a good writer?.Dude... @Omarfaruq he calls you!