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Well, I won't beat around the bush. I've read the title, synopsis, and chapter 1 (prologue?). Here are my impressions: (1) The title is...

Oops, sorry. Just an opinion on the cover and description, and if you hate time to check the first chapter, that too! Thanks!

I hide my list cause fuck you, that's why. :blob_sir: Nobody needs to see the cringe I look at or stories I've neglected reading.

I like displaying my reading lists to show off stories I love and would recommend. But I understand why some readers prefer to hide it.

This is genuinely how it feels.

I noticed more users are hiding their public reading list. There are many reasons for this behaviour. Most of the time, it's to prevent...

My thought: What feedback do you want?

Well, this is the reason why readers have difficulty focusing on your narrative. Because your narrative often shifts POV suddenly...

Yes, I messed up then; I didn't mention he was standing in front of the fence. I thought the info in the last chapter carried over to...

limited third, only his thoughts and what he knows is explained. But i believe i slipped into omniscient third in few places?

Okay, I'm following the logic of limited third POV. Dude, where is Aegis in the coliseum? How does he know such small details, like...

Definitely, because I think straightforward prose suits my world better. And you are right, I need to work on my white spaces issues...

Dude, which POV are you using? Omniscient third POV or limited third POV?

Please refrain from doing this kind of stunt again.

He can't make threads. His thread creating abilities were banned by Lord Tony.