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Definitely, because I think straightforward prose suits my world better. And you are right, I need to work on my white spaces issues...

Dude, which POV are you using? Omniscient third POV or limited third POV?

Please refrain from doing this kind of stunt again.

He can't make threads. His thread creating abilities were banned by Lord Tony.

A lot of cultivation stories are cringe, to be fair.

Sis, I don't hate cultivation. I'm just annoyed by the trope of young masters complaining to their ancestors only to be repeated in...

"Cringe." Say Eldoria to every cultivation story ever.

Well, I'm pretty sure you're an author who has integrity and artistic vision like @JayMark :blob_salute:

I would say if you want feedback, you should create a feedback request thread in the feedback section.

@Eldoria you have to read this book to increase your cortisol level.

Mom threw my phone and it kind of hit the bedstand and I just cut finger writing this lol

So, @JayMark gave me an idea, which he posted in this thread, so I'm doing one for myself. Introduction: Hello! I'm Hans Trondheim, a...

In short. Naruto is a naïve child, that think the world is sunny, that there is peace bc everyone became friends. Without knowing he...

One thing that people pointed out (or at least i seen in CNs that are good at psychology) Naruto succeeded = because he is strong...

Because Pain's realism easier to do than Naruto's idealism. While the common people live within Hashirama's principles...