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That's kind of hard for me to define. One sentence can either be very short or very long. One paragraph can consist of one sentence, but...

:meowsip:Consult historical pricing and adjust for inflation.

Personally speaking, it sounds uninteresting. There's no tension or reason to read the story if it's just about some guy effortlessly...

It's not my kind of thing. Super strength and overpowered protagonists aren't interesting to me. Do you want like some things to think...

Will check it out after dinner!!! :blob_paint:

If possible, you can read Captain Reynard chapter in this feedback request thread and provide a feedback. Thank you...

Sorry for replying this late but I was planning on replying after I'm done reading your chapters (though I could finish reading only one...

I agree with other respondents that your narrator over-explains the characters' thoughts and feelings. In an amnesia scene, your scene...

Once again, let me summon @Eldoria the Great!!!

I'm so glad you later explained that the context of the scene was memory loss because this almost felt like the tension in the tone was...

Ease the metaphors. There are too many, and since we are in Iris’s head, lines like these sound as if a narrator is speaking to the...

:meowsip: Looks good. Formatting might be a tad cleaner. Also tone back on the metaphors.

I really like the premise. If you're looking for more tension here, I'd recommend leaving out the internal thoughts/intentions of...

I asked them if they could handle smut. SH and RR readers responded the same. They’re the same people. There. Myth debunked.

You gotta make them feel included in the storymaking process (even when you plan to ignore their suggestions). Polls that will get tons...