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It's a cliché, but it's quite effective in engaging the reader's emotions. Personally, I'd prioritize seeking out novels with a...

That sounds a lot like the second major arc (and only one I've heard most of) in My Werewolf System - except it's his mother and sister...

As a light novel writer, I agree that 3-5 sentences is the limit for a paragraph. But, I suspect readers of Western novels might be a...

Uh...isn't a paragraph 'cut' when an entire single idea was expressed on it, which should be around 3-5 sentences?

Add personal stakes and a down-to-earth background to make your readers care. For example, your protagonist is a poor, loving older...

Indeed, the fun in reading (imo, I can't represent others) is growth. And mister Mother's Milk here has none if he has super strength on...

Attention Span Tolerance for Min-Max Number of Sentences in a Paragraph Please state your opinion in the following format, for example...

If it's your first book and somebody said it's shit, it's probably true. The key here is not to be too proud to the point that you can't...

Sounds... pretty boring TBH... Like OPM would be if there wasn't other stuff happening. The fighting shouldn't even be the focus of this...

Take care of your family. Humble and wholesome cat. *pat pat pat pat pat pat

I was gonna do some writing today… but my dad is really sick so I had to take over some responsibilities and help my mom… a bit of a...

Why not?

I was wondering if I should have summoned you to my thread so you could give me advice on how to write a better scene. But I was afraid...

Japanese Dad: "Did I not raise you well? You are not good girls!" Daughters: "Nani!?" Dad: "I show you how. Watch!"

Write POV based on your character's voice. Let your character's soul guide you as you narrate what your character is doing 'right now'...