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I think this approach is practically the same as "first-person." It doesn't really make it any better. I do allow myself to add more of...

Thank you for the clarification. I did try to minimize the narrator's voice in the narrative and make the scenes more subtext that can...

Thank you for the clarification. My interpretation came from several details in the chapter. The poison Reynard took is not clearly...

It really depends on your goals with the story and how you would like to present it. First person allows for the audience to immerse...

I closed my eyes to the second example. Which is better, the first POV or the third POV? The short answer is, it depends on your...

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"Good prose is like a windowpane." - George Orwell

Good points to consider.

Thank you for your honest feedback.:blob_salute:

1. Since Captain Reynard is already dead in the present timeline, I felt that the narrative might be skipping through time. The chapter...

Yes. The speed at which you read needs to follow the action and pace of the fight. ^ This is supposed to be the buildup to the climax...

You should understand that The relationship between author, fiction, and reader is like a symbolic contract. The author provides a...

I use google translate. I typed the word in my native tongue that would fit there, then I would look for synonyms if the words didn't...

wait a cotton picking minute here. this is the old... three monkey nick-knack. speak no evil, hear no evil, see no evil. Question...

I mean, it is impressive how you managed to push on through sheer passion despite lacking results. There is a word for this. Grit...