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Eldoria reacted to Boundless's post in the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it? with
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could you be more specific? by the way I am not actually writing a western-style novel, but a Light Novel where "telling" is more... -
Eldoria replied to the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?.It's good enough. But you can make the prose shorter but more impactful. For example: The initial narration: Revised narration: You...
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Eldoria reacted to Boundless's post in the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it? with Like.
am I doing this right? The moment the hammerhead connected with Agnar’s head, a painful shockwave tore through his body. Blood streamed...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Well, I might start posting here after all..What does banned mean? I really don't know.:blob_hmm_two::sweating_profusely:
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Eldoria replied to the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?.Readers won't be confused if you provide unique character identification, clear relative positions of related characters, and clear...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?.As a causal reader, I can understand the course of the fight. But I don't feel the tension. Why? Because your narrator explains how the...
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Eldoria reacted to Boundless's post in the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it? with Like.
Opinions? LMK if there's lacking... or I overdid it. Thanks in advance!
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Eldoria reacted to NotaNuffian's post in the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it? with Like.
As a casual reader and mainly in chinese, the above example does sound fine. Straight to the point. Though "a devastating blow" and...
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I was a little late with my updates, lol
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Eldoria reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread How long should the story and chapters be? with Like.
Speaking as a writer, for both book and chapters, as long as they NEED to be to feel right. Speaking as a reader, chapters should be...
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Eldoria reacted to Hans.Edward.Trondheim's post in the thread How long should the story and chapters be? with Like.
What do you mean length of chapter? The word count? Ideal is 1k to 2k, but I find it difficult to write in those counts, so my regular...
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Ah, you're a regional neighbor. Well, like all others say here, think why you write, and base your motivation from there. The hobby we...
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Thanks, ig i stop taking every single feedback seriously. No, no, I am from a land with tons of spices.