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Eldoria reacted to Dawnathon's post in the thread Recommendations Can you recommend one fiction title that sticks out in your mind after reading it many years ago? with
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Analogue: A Hate Story Having seen enough love stories, I wondered what a "hate story" would be. I think it did a good job answering... -
Eldoria replied to the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"?.Using first POV doesn't automatically make it immersive. Often, authors understand POV as simply the pronoun "I am," not the lived...
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Eldoria reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with Like.
two things. is a "light novel" what I would have called a 'graphic novel'?? IE, a comic book with prose pages. If so, i once enjoyed the...
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Eldoria reacted to Playerkartik's post in the thread I'd really really appreciate a review(Chapter 1) with Like.
Thank you for your feedbacks. I will make the necessary changes
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Majority will skip it. Keep it within 2k-3k. But if you are popular and have a reader base, go ahead. There are a few authors who write...
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Yes. Many readers will skip it, even if it is very well written. Better to split it into 2K or 3K chapters.
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Eldoria replied to the thread I'm confident I created a manga.It seems we need to redefine text in images and images containing text.
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Eldoria replied to the thread I’d Really Appreciate Your Feedback.You keep giving ambiguous answers and full of promises. If you're going to provide feedback, please be direct and honest! That will be...
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Worst mistake I made starting out in the web novel space is launching on three platforms. Having to do edits on all three sites makes me...
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Eldoria replied to the thread I'd really really appreciate a review(Chapter 1).Try writing from a limited third POV first. If your narrative can provide a limited third POV through the protagonist, it will be more...
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Eldoria replied to the thread I'd really really appreciate a review(Chapter 1).I actually have a lot of criticism... but I don't want to burden you with too much criticism. I want you to focus on solving the most...
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Oh wow it's very detailed. Too detail actually. For me i prefer something more snappy or compact on the detail. Maybe focus more on...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Make a generic CN synopsis of your story!.This kind of synopsis is more like a mini prologue but is still better than a story summary.
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Eldoria reacted to MFontana's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
Thank you both for the input. The actions are coming soon enough, and I do have a clear mental picture of how to incorporate them into...
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Eldoria replied to the thread I'd really really appreciate a review(Chapter 1).Dude... I don't understand why you wrote first POV and third POV in a chapter. What's your purpose in using 2 POVs in a chapter? It's...