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Eldoria reacted to Deleted member 44974's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with
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That's a weird way to say @Tabula_Rasa will report it to see what will happens. -
Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with Like.
If you're after readers, then why not post this in the Reader's subforum?
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Eldoria replied to the thread Question about oversharing or lore dumping in story?.What you need to ask yourself: Does your information advance the plot? Does it emerge organically through character interactions? Does...
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Eldoria reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread Question about oversharing or lore dumping in story? with Like.
Sounds fine to me. It isn't too verbose, so your readers should be able to retain most of it without you having to repeat it later.
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Eldoria reacted to VM_Belwynd's post in the thread Question about oversharing or lore dumping in story? with Like.
So in this situation, my deuteragonist, is trying to explain the bond to the protagonist. He has been transported to the world, has no...
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"Does your character have the same eye color as you? Bad author! Your character can't have the same eye color as 80% of the planet."
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I agree, I think some of the questions are more about 'self insert' than mary sue.
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Correct. We use the term "Mary Sue" in honor of the Star Trek fanfiction character that brought the trope to light. Before that...
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These quizzes ask the dumbest questions.
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Eldoria replied to the thread Is your character a mary sue?.I suspect the quiz maker created naive and careless operational questions, he couldn't distinguish what the essence of the Marry Sue...
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Extremely so, out of the many unpublished stories I've trashed. I grabbed one of my earlier pieces of garbage where my MC was definitely...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Is your character a mary sue?.Agree. Other questions are also biased, such as those regarding FMC's royalty background and special power. The problem is, royalty...
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:blob_uwu: I knew that you'd be the first or atleast one of the first few to reply to that poll.
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Whoever made this biased test doesn't even know what a Mary Sue is. Lots of the questions are wasted trying to determine if the...
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Eldoria replied to the thread What's the smallest thing that could change your entire storyline?.Well, if my FMC hadn't pursued the last tyrant of the Rose kingdom in the ancient ruins, then the world wouldn't have experienced a...