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Eldoria reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread Is the power of love the key to popularity? with
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play a RPG video game? Make a story with the levels and stats from game. Get roasted if you mess up the numbers. Get tired of doing... -
Eldoria reacted to PancakesWitch's post in the thread Is this alright or it need more polish. with Wow.
write for three more years and return, nobody can be a better editor other than your own future self don't be afraid of failing or...
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Eldoria reacted to LastMinami's post in the thread Is the power of love the key to popularity? with Love.
That sounds very interesting; I've never thought about it before. I'll read some to learn more. I really don't understand LitRPG, I'll...
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Eldoria reacted to Fairemont's post in the thread Is the power of love the key to popularity? with Like.
Well, you're in luck, because they are bound by the sisterhood of magical girlness!
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Eldoria replied to the thread Is the power of love the key to popularity?.I prefer female characters in my fiction to be bound by a relationship called a "sisterhood." They genuinely care because they feel...
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Eldoria reacted to Hans.Trondheim's post in the thread Is the power of love the key to popularity? with Sad.
Hah. I present you, my own trash. Look at my Favorite to Reader to Chapter ratio, and feel better, because you write better.
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Thank you, I'll try to implement it. For now I'll revise my chapter 1 again.
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If you have the ability to do so, print it out. If not, slap it into word, google docs, or anything else with a highlighter feature, and...
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Well, you still do a good job at it. :blob_aww:
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Eldoria replied to the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open].I don't know why but when you appear, your presence makes me smile. :meowsip:
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Eldoria reacted to georgelee5786's post in the thread Is the power of love the key to popularity? with Like.
How about you try using the power of good writing
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Eldoria replied to the thread Is this alright or it need more polish..Dude... please enter your thread into the feedback section so that other authors can easily find it.
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Eldoria reacted to Assurbanipal_II's post in the thread Is this alright or it need more polish. with Wow.
Where is the Polish?
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Well, if that is the case, then make good use of Eldoria's advice and my example to refine your writing and bring forth the improvement...
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Eldoria reacted to c37's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
Okay my bad sorry. So only the description which are important should be conveyed through an action, I don't need to go in to details to...