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I am re-writing my high fantasy again...You might be knowing about it from before could you suggest a good novel which has expressed the...

The best feedback I ever received was that a dumb joke I slipped into the narration snapped the reader out of the trance he was in while...

Was feeling like "Eh, let's just try and post already." And I don't regret a single bit of it. Thx. I wonder if OP is now overwhelmed by...

If the author wants to balance description and action, the author can use cinematic action narrative, narrating the description...

To manage pacing... think about how the author narrates the story? Descriptive narrative slows down the pacing because narrative time...

When a reader reads a story, there are three times running simultaneously: Real time, the time that takes place in the real world...

Same. My chapter one is good, but the prologue serves as a much better start for the story. I just want folks to have fun with my...

The best feedback will be from you and another guy who told me it was good work; the worst will be from a critic who only read the...

was part of the mass translation/guidelines violation ban that happened yesterday. Novel is probably available somewhere else. Check on...

I write prologues as part of my overall story, and not infodumps. Kinda like you skip it, and you miss some points/details in my story...

For me, the prologue = chapter 1. The prologue is the entry point into the story, containing the story's premise. I didn't give it a...

In the story I am currently writing, the prologue is of heavy importance. It was only recently that I remembered that some folks skip...

Honestly, I don't see any significant differences between the 3 versions of this chapter. All chapters have a similar characteristic...

Got some feedback on a scene and need to know which version flows better, is the least confusing, and captures the "best" vibe...

My work is PG-13 ???