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I've never noticed this myself, but then I read mostly paperbacks. I assume anything like that would have been taken care of by the...

I dunno about that. But then omniscient perspectives are hard to pull off well, in my experience. Not impossible, but people are...

The only real difference between a multi-POV and head hopping is the fact that one is a technique, the other is an error. Head-hopping...

Head-hopping, to my understanding, is when you're writing through one character's POV, and then in the middle of the scene, you jump in...

Why are all my reactions capped out again? I didn't use that many already.

You can use italics for character thoughts (monologues). But... In practice, that theory is quite difficult to apply in web novels...

Okay you are right, i did use those tags a lot.

I'll give you a little immersive recipe based on my research... an immersive narrative is one that cleverly hides the narrator's voice...

Paragraphs are essentially an idea isolated in the text from other ideas. Each new paragraph essentially resets the short term thinking...

It feels really weird for me, yeah. Huge paragraphs aren't great to look at either, you're right. I find that the best length is about...

Why do you want my feedback? You can see... my feedback is so honest that authors who aren't mentally prepared might get discouraged or...

Slaneesh wants to know your location. *Happy degenerate noise* Oh i might include more than that... btw can you review my book if you...

The best feedback i’ve ever received was probably to trust my readers imagination. The worst was “add smut” ?

If you include that weird scene in your story, my parents will spank me. I'm just a fussy little girl. :blob_teary:

Well, in any case, since I finally understood this...I'm not really in favor, though I will surely benefit in this suggestion. For one...