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Eldoria reacted to Jaymi's post in the thread I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it with
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The most important part of a web novel is the first chapter. It makes sense, really. On a place like scribblehub, where readers have... -
Eldoria reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Like.
I'll take it with a grain of salt, because I still believe if you waste like hours and hours of time, reading 800k words, you'll at...
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Eldoria reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Like.
Best feedback “Your protagonist feels like a secondary character in your story because you are so in love with the love interest.” It...
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Eldoria reacted to BearlyAlive's post in the thread When does a character go from flawed to unlikable? with Like.
I find RR people to be a weird bunch. They're either supportive or they're the kind of "Uhhh, Ackschually!" people that think themselves...
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Eldoria reacted to Fairemont's post in the thread When does a character go from flawed to unlikable? with Like.
Generally, this line is crossed when the character refuses to acknowledge their flaws, and/or refuses to do anything about them...
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Eldoria reacted to Nolff's post in the thread Battle of Megacity-0 complete! Feedback wanted with Like.
What the f*ck is this notepad format chaps? You expect me to drag my cursor? Please, make this more convenient.
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Eldoria reacted to Nolff's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Like.
The best feedbacks are praises. The worst feedbacks are getting none. Now flip the word 'best' and 'worst'. If you got two reviews...
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Eldoria reacted to MFontana's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Like.
Mistakes are a part of being human. We all make them, and I'm not judging you (or the feedback that holds merit) for yours. The input...
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Eldoria reacted to Playerkartik's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Wow.
I got two reviews: One telling that I used too much Ai... the other telling my MC is not distict from other charecters. I can't tell if...
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Eldoria reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Wow.
Since it fits the thread, I have recently received a pretty funny Review as well, and I'd like to share the story. The Review perfectly...
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Eldoria reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Wow.
Last place I was at before here. You would post excerpts and ask for feedback. I'm paraphrasing, of course... ---------------- dude...
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Eldoria reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Like.
Any advice I have given you is totally offset by my mistake and wrong feedback, since my brain has deteriorated from reading only...
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Eldoria reacted to MFontana's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Love.
The best (in terms of positive feedback) would be a tie between: and The former comment was back in ~2008-2010 on the sample here...
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Eldoria reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Like.
Oh, you don't need to critique MFGR anymore unless you just want to read it for your own enjoyment. Honestly, I will rewrite Arc 1 at...
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Eldoria reacted to MFontana's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Love.
I appreciate the shout-out, Juia, and the compliment, El, and I do hope the feedback helps as well, Myth. [I'm sorry it took so long to...