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1) I plan the entire story first. 2) Then, I plan the arcs using the overall story plotpoints as my "anchor". If you want, I can give...

What's your definition of a story arc?

@SenseiHusky Here, this fella is willing to rate your stuff. :blobthumbsup:

Think about the problem formulation that forms the core of the main conflict throughout the arc. You'll notice that works as large as...

Sorry for hijacking your profile post. ?

You should put this thread in the feedback session.

I must have started writing somewhere around 2012. I had the pleasure of experiencing an 85mph car flip on the median of a highway, and...

Careful about hijacking someone else's thread, there. :blob_okay: Hey, may I ask you a question about this dialogue? I've noticed...

To actually give you feedback, I enjoyed the prologue. It feels heavy. Every word had weight and its purpose for existing. For any dark...

Just got back from work. Lemme see what's in there. :sweat_smile: The first line of the synopsis... :blob_blank:

Dude, I'm sorry. One comment you mention is a scammer who praises you and then offers a hidden scheme. If you encounter comments like...

Hungry for blood. Then I had someone berate me for having the gall to use my already paid ad buy when my story was rated under 3. They...

The thing about show don't tell is that nobody knows what it means. Except for me. I know what it means.

Why not?

I'm reaching the climax of the first arc of my first story! It has gotten some likes, and even one comment! However I've yet to get a...