Eldoria's latest activity

Please share a link to your fiction. Let other members judge it. Dude, they really made up random account names. They're just showing...

Thanks everyone. I’ve already sent the email. I really appreciate your help.

You guys write?

You guys have backlog?

I understand and accept the criticism given. The whole premise was meant to lean more into a comedic trope rather than a serious fight...

I had to be REALLY careful with that, yes. Not everyone is going to write like I do, so it's hard sometimes to "pull away" from me, and...

Looks like the Daniel Thomas person got vaporized. :blob_popcorn:

I see... a little daughter is cute.

Because that was the only one I could vote on that had this in the title: "...Just Wants to Live in Peace with Her Little Daughter."...

Sorry, sis (or dude?). I suggested your feedback thread to the people offering feedback because I thought they would actually HELP you...

Just write it and see what happens. As the old saying go, 'Fuck around and find out'. its how people experience the world.

Why did you choose the sequel, dude?

:blob_aww:

I have a lot of unfinished fiction. Please check out this thread...

That line hits the same issue I had with the chapter. So right now, what both of us have read, the fight doesn't create a clear...