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Eldoria replied to the thread World Anvil: Does anyone know how to use it?.I'm not helping you. I draw functional maps from rough sketches. I prioritize map functionality. I've seen some LNs also emphasize map... -
Eldoria replied to the thread A fresh start. What would you do?.What do you mean by validating the wrong things? Are you waiting for perfection to happen before you act? Don't forget... many writers...
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Rewrites exist for a reason, and this is one of them. Do not be afraid to edit your work even when you already posted it, and do not...
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Eldoria reacted to CinnaSloth's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with
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Number 1. Easily better than 2 no contest. The only thing I would change from: remove the quotes from fireball, unless Harry is also... -
You shouldn't drink coffee as if it were water; it's not good for your health. You should sleep at least 7 hours. Don't try too hard to...
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Wrote 3k words for OyasumiSe7en Volume 3 today. Planning to do 3k words per day for the entire month of February until it reaches...
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Thats a sign you need to stop drinking coffee and detox.
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Eldoria reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How do you place the reader in the third POV? with Like.
No mention of the sound of the wheat rustling in the wind, the dryness of it brushing against her skin?
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Eldoria reacted to CLASS_NOT_AUTHOR's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
I got that. I think the way I said it was wrong. I understood it was a tactical battle, but for me(personal opinion), for such a...
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Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread How do you add an Author’s Note on Scribble Hub? with Like.
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Eldoria reacted to yakusu's post in the thread Seeking Brutally Honest, No-Holds-Barred Feedback on My Book Cover with Like.
The first thing I see is the shield... However, it's Litrpg right, you need to bring the screen more vibrant or equal as the shield. The...
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Eldoria reacted to K_Nishi's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Love.
Scene 1 it is. The question is whether an image forms in the reader’s mind. And that is already decided within the first two lines.
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