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Yeah. It's a personal opinion, that's why salt is heavily added. 🧂 I ain't trying to be negative :blob_pat_sad:, sorry if offended. Am...

I'm going to be brutally honest here, take my comment with a grain of salt. As a reader. *All the attempted meme ads are really fucking...

Cool ad campaign. Kinda wish it told me more of what you're writing, rn it just feels like all the other ads I've seen around.

Are you writing for escapism or for readers reactions or smoothness of story, you just mentioned different writing priorities. Because...

There are many ways to avoid writing I. East Asians and Southeast Asians do not use pronouns as much as westerners do. This is in part...

Maybe you can delay the academy arc until the characters are older/stronger. Then write them as instructors instead, makes for a...

No difference. All are fold able in the eyes of my laundry abilities of Kung-Fold, Fold-Jitsu and Sock Wondo.

Folding clothes while people are still in em

HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM. Sus as fuck response right here boys. Can people stop letting AI talk for them pls lmao

Do the opposite. Zerg-rush the users with 50 chapters before they can even comprehend. Don't let the readers know your next move.

I read my own novel to learn how to write peak.

I would suggest looking for classic first-person stories and see how they were done. "The Big Sleep" (the more coherent but less...

For the "white room syndrome" you got. For all the "I" that you keep sprinkling in. Stop being so self-centered. Should cut a little...

Most readers expect to see “I” used a ton in a first person story, so don’t ever beat yourself up if you see it a few dozen times in a...

Needs more emotions. MC feels like a wet plank. It's got the conversation, It's got the descriptions. (y) Needs what the MC is feeling...