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Hmmm...very good advice. Although being stuck in first-person means I can't really go in depth with my other characters internal...

Don't leave your protagonist alone (or alone with their thoughts) for more than a few seconds. If all their friends/enemies/whatever...

The person in the carriage is Liriel, and yes it is a memory. I explain it as the chapter continues, but I can see why it's jarring...

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That's very insightful and actually super helpful with the example... But I guess I can't spam emotions too much, you can only have...

Backlog too large :er_what_s: I have a major problem in which I require readers to point out my mistakes quickly so I can fix them. I...

I can't help it. I'm too excited at writing new plots. Edit : Will post less frequently. My posting schedule is messed up.

Sounds good but if I do it too much. I basically have no room for conversations and if I try to find new vocab to describe the...

I have no idea what is appealing to the SH audience, I've got the gist that its mostly smut and pretty girl on cover so I've got that...

I have found that eventually, as much as you plan. Things would probably slip through and need to be caught embarrassingly by...

Just curious tbh. I constantly find myself yearning for the moment to start writing the actual story after I understand the world I'm...

I realized in my writings, I've managed to write I multiple times per paragraph, I'm also stuck with white room syndrome where I don't...

Did not read all the way but it seems like a classic money money romance that people would absolutely devour up. 1. Although the MC...

1. Slow burn and starting with a war sounds awesome, just make sure the war stays in their memory for most of the starting chapters and...

Mostly just from the earlier vibes, the pushing of him somehow "falling" into ~success~