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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Darkodia's post in the thread Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless with
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Here's one my mine, if you're interested: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2116707/litrpg-infinite-resets/ -
Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Tempokai's post in the thread Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless with Like.
I premise with this one thing: I skipped 10+ webnovels from the list. The reason is simple: they either have been abandoned for months...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless with Like.
I agree... Tempokai is overworked because there are so many people that want their stories reviewed. Personally, I'm not interested in...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Vanny's post in the thread I’d like some feedback on a book I’m working on with Like.
I see your point. I’ll probably have to include some stuff in the synopsis when I post it here in a couple months. Thanks a lot for the...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Joyager2's post in the thread I’d like some feedback on a book I’m working on with Like.
There's not a lot of meat here. Your chapter is almost exclusively dialogue, with bits of really bare prose here and there. On top of...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Vanny's post in the thread I’d like some feedback on a book I’m working on with Like.
Okay so I’m a returning author. I’ve been away from writing for about 7 years. I’ve recently started a new book, and I’ll only post it...
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I come again with another call for help. I don’t know how to write synopsis lol. My previous one was a flop so I'm asking for advice...
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Well, At Least I’m a Magic Pirate Now: a story in which a finance bro gets a really shitty entry-level job and then has to deal with...
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Sure. 1. Two women share a body and fight dinosaurs. 2. Pokemon but.... Gay and depressed. 3. A goth and a jock try not to have sex. 4...
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My stories are garbage and have a chance to be deleted, so please check them out at your leisure.
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pursuing redemption in another world, the story is full of contradictions, hope core mixed with tragedy, the mc is weak against everyone...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to ViktorBloodfallen's post in the thread Plug your story badly! with Like.
The Mourning Star: A Grimdark Vampire Isekai A trauma porn of cliches and tropes. Watch as the MC is trauma bonding with the first man...
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The Prince Won't Leave Me Alone. Just like that. The title is enough to explain the web novel's premise badly and I refuse to elaborate.
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A young man nearly gets his @$$ beat after doing terrible in a test, now he has a system that allows him to essentially become God, all...
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We have all seen them, maybe we have been them. Writers who shamelessly plug their work, looking for feedback, trying to gain a few...