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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism with
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It's definitely a clanker, but is it a good clanker? I'll give it a read after a few more chapters are released, not worth starting for... -
Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism with Like.
@ekam That was not just fair, that was good. I enjoyed the response orchestrated as a surprise entertainment very much; we don't receive...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to ekam's post in the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism with Like.
Hi, thank you so much for taking the time to read Thirteen and provide such a thoughtful critique. As a first-timer sharing my work...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism with Like.
It's a fair prologue to hook an audience, but... where's the bait? I feel like there is something you are missing, a piece of dangling...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to HungrySheep's post in the thread What's your opinion on giving constructive feedback for folks who do generate AI slop? with Like.
My feedback is always the same. If they want to truly improve, they have to stop using AI as a crutch. It's that simple. Imagine if we...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to L1aei's post in the thread What's your opinion on giving constructive feedback for folks who do generate AI slop? with Like.
You deserve a cookie for that. :blob_cookie: Just for clarity, you mentioned there will be good with bad, that sounds fair but how...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to mythosandmagic's post in the thread Just want a quick review for my novel with Like.
It's a bit heavy on the narrator's voice. Remember, show, don't tell.
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to TheIcMan's post in the thread Just want a quick review for my novel with Like.
Formatting needs some work, and so does the sentence structures. They're all the same long sentences with multiple parts.
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Just want a quick review for my novel with Like.
This fiction is quite good. I found it to have personal stakes in the family relationship (mother and younger sister), which makes it...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Genesis_King's post in the thread Just want a quick review for my novel with Like.
Started a new novel a few days ago and thought that at least should get some feedback about how it seems to others. For me it seems...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to chivesgeorgiy's post in the thread When readers misinterpret your intent. with Like.
That’s such a valuable experience to share. It’s never easy to receive feedback that points out unintended interpretations, but you...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Golden_Hyde's post in the thread When readers misinterpret your intent. with Like.
Just like what I thought. Although the #3 and #4 can be influenced through better delivery. I remember someone said the similar thing...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to ACertainPassingUser's post in the thread When readers misinterpret your intent. with Like.
Well, its not just #1 Intent. There's also #2 Delivery. And The outside factor, as : #3 What the people would feel and think of you...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to mythosandmagic's post in the thread When readers misinterpret your intent. with Like.
Thanks, Frowfy, I really appreciate your perspective. You’re absolutely right, sometimes reviews come from misunderstanding or even from...
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Cookiez_N_Potionz reacted to Frowfy's post in the thread When readers misinterpret your intent. with Like.
Oof, I just laugh and accept. When you keep reading the intentions naturally will become clear anyway and the readers who follow you...