Recent content by c37

You can remove the quotes from the chapter title. It will look better again, only if not intentional.

Hey just a heads-up, your each chapter name is in different format(unless intentional).

Hail Arch devil, I require a champion to review my slaves(Mc and co) in my recent chapters(i.e., chapter 6,7) from my grimoire, and whoever is strong enough to do it will be exalted by the Arch duke, and an Infernal engine will be installed in your chest. Name: B*stard of Abaddon. (no romance)...

Fine choice of words.

I prefer this one because it is slightly closer to my context. @Makimaam, so ig you are no.1 and @BeezussWrites is no.2?

Unfortunately, I had to stay at college(tablet and pen is at home) this week, maybe you'll get to see it on the 19th? I am surprised you commented. I will definitely complete it.

This is getting interesting :blob_cookie:

Welcome froren.

Hey, thank you so much for reading. 😁 And yeah this is my most recent one, the one which I have written after revisiting my favorite novels. I am starting to see the gaps which can instantly make this better. I will definitely, follow your advice about avoiding longer sentences with multiple verbs.

No, you didn't sound hostile; it just felt like my responsibility as a person asking for a review to provide everything beforehand.

Absolute satisfaction.✋🤚

Yes, I messed up then; I didn't mention he was standing in front of the fence. I thought the info in the last chapter carried over to this one. Ig not. Apart from that, what is your opinion on the whole narrative?

limited third, only his thoughts and what he knows is explained. But i believe i slipped into omniscient third in few places?

Definitely, because I think straightforward prose suits my world better. And you are right, I need to work on my white spaces issues. Thanks, but the scene was cut off before something else portraying the tension which is not supposed to be there. It was my bad, I messed up by not including...

As many writers pointed out, I realised prose meant the whole chapter with context and imagery, which pulls the reader into the world. So i tried my best and completed the chapter with as much description i can provide dynamically.