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after your character is a full fledged adult, they can talk about the past. this generates sympathy for your poor good character. it...

Ehhh😅 maybe let's not go there? I agree with the rest of your points though.

I might be dim, but 'his thighs still hurt' didn't connect me to SA. I would have thought that he was beaten or something if it wasn't...

Okay, I think this approach will be better. Thanks for the suggestion.

Just remove 'his thighs still hurt' and replace it with a shudder or a knot in his stomach or smthing. this is fairly mild anyway.

Aren't you very encouraging?

Hmm, I'll consider this.

1. The worst placement is at the start of your opening chapter, especially when done to your MC. 2. Most readers hate endless...

Sprinkle vague hints but don’t be explicit. Keep readers guessing. Introducing a red herring is ideal. Then, during the fight, reveal...

Thank you, this sounds much better than what I initially envisioned. Don't worry, I didn't include it in my published chapter.

so its better to refer to it when he is taking revenge on his abusers (much, much later)? @Eldoria, this is definitely why I asked this...

I want to hear different perspectives before making my own decisions. Also i wanted to know how much is too much.

I feel betraying my world if I completely ignore that topic itself. Or you want me to not include it at all?

Ofc i am not gonna add it to that particular ch, I just used it as an example to show how I would refer to it in future.

You are approved, proceed.