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Sprinkle vague hints but don’t be explicit. Keep readers guessing. Introducing a red herring is ideal. Then, during the fight, reveal...

Thank you, this sounds much better than what I initially envisioned. Don't worry, I didn't include it in my published chapter.

so its better to refer to it when he is taking revenge on his abusers (much, much later)? @Eldoria, this is definitely why I asked this...

I want to hear different perspectives before making my own decisions. Also i wanted to know how much is too much.

I feel betraying my world if I completely ignore that topic itself. Or you want me to not include it at all?

Ofc i am not gonna add it to that particular ch, I just used it as an example to show how I would refer to it in future.

You are approved, proceed.

This is definitely not the final version.

If you need to ask... I'll trust the readers and let them decide how I would finish that sentence.

It is illegal to be written like you do with adults. Check out the laws involving that to avoid getting in trouble.

Descriptions of the act itself: no go Mentioning the act has happened and connoted as a crime: yes readers can perfectly fine fill in...

I wouldn't describe the act itself or the actions that happened. I want to refer to the fact that it happened through vague physical...

If the paladin didn't exist, my MC would have always been a slave.

Is hinting or including a scene where it is implied that a child has gone through it or is going through it too much? I am writing a...

stated the laws and a few things that are important to the story. Inanitas is the domain of Vorax and one of the systematic domains of...