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Just stated the sections and a few things about the city. You want me to add anything specific?

Inanitas is the domain of Vorax and one of the systematic domains of Abaddon. Theme - A city built on greed. The pitt is one of the...

Thank you for reading. This is actually helpful. Time to re-write. :)

Well, if what I provided is correct Long lines like these can be divided and shortened to give her a more childlike personality. Like--...

What is her exact age? Because a few lines(very few) feel a little mechanical for her age(since the whole chapter is in her pov).

Thank you for reading.

A nice piece of action with a little thriller, but not scary. Though this might just be me. Imo the 'horror' comes from the unknown and...

You want your reader to connect with your MC rather than be excited over them. My exposure to movies and games only taught me one...

1. I feel like Caelan El Rose is around 5-9 years old, unless she is some weird immortal being that is trapped in eternal youth. 2. I...

In a way, dark fantasy is the main genre.

My bias toward Japanese weapons, especially katanas alike, is forcing me to say odachi. But other than that i would say Pata (gauntlet...

I tried my hand at horror in this chapter and want to see how I carried the eeriness and horror. ch4 Aegis exhaled as he prepared...

They also represent their personalities, boy is more impulsive and the elf is more controlled.

Must a son answer for the sins of a father he never knew? Aegis was born a cambion in the infernal city of Inanitas — a place where...

ohh my bad, I thought you painted because of your username.