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I do like the comedy presented here. A wee lad giving advice on comedy, written in a way that reads like you gave chatgpt a prompt. I...

I am screenshotting this.

Don't treat your world as a static object that's observed. Make it alive, like an organism, interacting with your characters. Let the...

Okay so i missed the reason for the backstory trigger in chapter 2.

okay i think i understand why you feel like that. @Daeron I wanted to know if you were able to feel the transition between the flashback...

Depend on your intention or context, but i felt like losing the plot at chapter 2.

So you think i should explain the stuff more in the chapter 2?

I think this is my own personal taste, but i feel like the story plot breaking at chapter 2. Chapter 1 about arena, using short...

Damn! you've just given me a good hook with that suggestion. Thank you so much for reading.

Hi! I read your prologue on the Scribble Hub and wanted to share a few thoughts. First, I personally really enjoy dark fantasy, so I’m...

Your prose is amazing btw. Breaking my rule because I love the people in this story. I kinda like everyone is so sex positive and...

So you think i should cut prologue section all together? or just prologue one? Because after reading your review i feel like i can show...

First, I want to echo what other folks have been saying. Putting every sentence on a new line is really not the way to go about things...

You can use italics for character thoughts (monologues). But... In practice, that theory is quite difficult to apply in web novels...

what about a character's thoughts? Should i just describe how they are feeling instead of writing their thoughts?